Translation Check by Chrouya
Script: hdxd_-_09[edited].ass
Workraw: dxd09wr.avi
* Asterisks implying comments*

15
Given the difference in experience and war potential between Raiser and you,
*going for the literal translation*

16
I believe it's appropriate to level the playing field.
*changed a meaning, the rest is left the same*

20
[timing error?]

25
Just as I thought. You're a devil, President!
*devil in contrast to demon is better*
*maybe add italics for devil and demon*

29
you mentioned something about despising Fallen Angels and Priests. Is that about...
*stay consistent with nikui==> despising*
*don't forget the "are tte..."

36
Yeah, of course! Definitely!
*omission of the sentence "Zettai ni*

39
Not like that! It's not about swinging your sword,
*omission of the sentence "Sou jyanai!"

40
but about watching your opponent and your surroundings.
*consistancy*

45
Concentrate your magic through your entire body as if it originates from an aura.

46
Focus your mind and feel the surge of magic

49
it seems Asia-chan might have a talent for magic.
*kamo shiremasen == more doubt implied*

50
W-Well, Asia getting strong is also great in a way...
*sore nara sore de == somewhat sarcastic*

52
Once you get used to magic, you can manipulate things like fire, water or lightning from scratch.

57
Your imagination is what limits your magic.

58
Anyway, forming a clear image in your head is the essence of it.

70
Aim for the discontinuity of your opponent's movements,
*changed to movements to make a logical sentence*

121
so make sure you can at least protect yourselves so you don't drag the others down.
*context of reasoning*

124
True, I'm the one who got Asia into this battle.
*omission of "tatakai"*

128
Oh, Issei, do you want to peek at us bathing?
*literal translation*

129
Why don't you enter together with us? I don't mind.
*same as above*

185
Souna's family; the Sitri Family,
*it's Souna*

201
Our secret?
*QC fix probably*

273
In terms of chess, it's called...

274
a swindle. 
*it's a chess term*
: The loser uses a trick to achieve a win or draw in a seemingly losing match

289
And being here, right now,
290
the Rias-senpai in front of me,
291
is my number one.
*keep it in one sentence*

294
Anyway, let's go and win more than just this battle.
*Probably QC needed for this one*

303
I will win everything beyond fighting as well.
*same as above*

309
Coming here made me unpleasantly realize
*literal translation*

361
to temporarily fight with the accumulated power.
*nicer English blablayadayada*

363
Issei, unleash your cluster of magic!
*katamari damacy~*



[This time I got too caught up in small details, sorry for that!]